Judging Standards Work Sample: Year 3 English - K

The annotated work samples in Judging Standards support teachers when reporting
against the achievement standards, when giving assessment feedback and when
explaining the differences between one student’s achievement and another’s.
Grey highlighting identifies those aspects of the achievement standard addressed in
the work sample. Annotations in black text refer to the assessment pointers, while
those in coloured text highlight additional, specific qualities evident in the work.
Reporting against the Achievement Standard
Imaginative writing: Narrative – What if?
The students wrote a continuation of the open-ended story, What if? by Jonathan Shipton, using the last line of the story
as the starter: ‘What if you landed on a secret door … and THERE WERE STEPS!’ One hour was given to complete the
task, independently.
Reading and viewing
By the end of Year 3, students understand how content can be organised using different text structures depending on the
purpose of the text. They understand how language features, images and vocabulary choices are used for different
effects. They read texts that contain varied sentence structures, a range of punctuation conventions, and images that
provide additional information. They identify literal and implied meaning connecting ideas in different parts of a text.
They select information, ideas and events in texts that relate to their own lives and to other texts.
Writing and creating
Their texts include writing and images to express and develop in some detail experiences, events, information, ideas and
characters. They demonstrate understanding of grammar and choose vocabulary and punctuation appropriate to the
purpose and context of their writing. They use knowledge of sounds and high frequency words to spell words accurately,
checking their work for meaning. They write using joined letters that are clearly formed and consistent in size.
Speaking and listening
Students listen to others’ views and respond appropriately. They understand how language features are used to link and
sequence ideas. They understand how language can be used to express feelings and opinions on topics. They create a
range of texts for familiar and unfamiliar audiences. They contribute actively to class and group discussions, asking
questions, providing useful feedback and making presentations.
Creating texts, Imaginative texts, Narrative
Student achievement is reported at the end of the semester or year using the letter grades
and achievement descriptors. Letter grades and achievement descriptors should not be used
to assess individual pieces of work.
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English: Year 3 Grade B Work Sample
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Plans and writes a range of texts (imaginative,
informative and persuasive). Connects the
elements of the appropriate text structure with
a given framework for familiar and unfamiliar
audiences. No evidence of planning is
provided.
Uses descriptive language and a range of
topic-specific vocabulary to enhance meaning
appropriate to the audience and purpose, e.g.
‘a secret sliding keystone’.
Spells most words accurately, using a bank of
known words, letter patterns and spelling
rules, e.g. ‘sliding’, ‘remember’, ‘underground’.
Writes simple, compound and complex
sentences to express ideas, feelings and
opinions, e.g. ‘What if behind the keystone is a
land of underground people who make the
plants grow and you meet a girl.’
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English: Year 3 Grade B Work Sample
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Correctly uses a range of appropriate
punctuation relevant to the purpose and
context, such as quotation marks for dialogue,
but sometimes omits the comma, e.g. ‘“We’ve
got a trespasser in our lands” he said’.
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English: Year 3 Grade B Work Sample
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