Japanese Beginners – Sample assessment tasks
Reading
Language: Japanese
Target group: Year 12
Marks: 10
Weighting: 10%
Date: Term 3 Year 12
Syllabus topic:
Friends, recreation and pastimes
Component:
Reading 10%
Context
Students have completed the topic of Friends, recreation and pastimes are now revising this topic including
more advanced structures.
Task
•
Read the emails from Kenji and Keiko about their weekends and answer in English the questions
that follow.
Outcomes to be assessed
A student:
2.1 understands and interprets information in texts using a range of strategies
2.2 conveys the gist of and identifies specific information in texts
2.3 summarises the main points of a text
2.4 draws conclusions from or justifies an opinion about a text
2.5 identifies the purpose, context and audience of a text
2.6 identifies and explains aspects of the cultures of Japanese-speaking communities in texts
Marking criteria
Students will be assessed on their ability to:
• understand and interpret the gist and specific information from a text
• draw and justify conclusions with supporting evidence from a text
• justify an opinion about a text
Marking guidelines are attached to the task.
Feedback
• Teacher will provide oral and written feedback on the task.
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Reading
Read the following emails and answer the questions in English.
Email 1
けい子さん、元気？
ぼくは、土よう日のよる、ぼくの大好きなロックバンドのコンサートに行っ
た。行く時、電車がすごくこんでいて、たいへんだった。コンサートは、と
そと
ってもよかったよ。でも、このコンサートは外であったから８時ごろあめが
ふって、さむかった。それで、今かぜをひいている。それに、ごみがいっぱ
いあって、トイレもきたなかった。けい子さんの週まつは、どうだった？
けんじ
Email 2
けんじくん、私は、元気よ。
今、家でホームステイしている、りゅう学生のトムくんが、日よう日にカラ
オケに行ってみたいと言ったから、はらじゅくえきの前にあるカラオケボッ
クスに行った。そのカラオケボックスは、えい語のうたがたくさんあって、
食べ物もやすくておいしかった。トムくんは、うたが大好きで、たくさんう
たったけど、じつは、トムくんのうたは、すご～くへたなの。私は、トムく
んのへたなうたを 3 時間ぐらい聞かなければならなかったから、ちょっとた
いへんだった。でも、トムくんはとてもうれしそうだったからよかった。
けい子
Questions
1. Who is Tom? (1)
2. Where is the Karaoke Box located? (1)
3. Do you think Tom had a good time on Sunday? Why/why not? (3)
4. How were the writers’ weekends overall? (5)
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Marking guidelines and sample answers
Question 1
Outcomes assessed: 2.1, 2.2, 2.5
• Identifies who Tom is
1
Sample answer:
Tom is an overseas student who is staying at Keiko’s house.
Question 2
Outcomes assessed: 2.1, 2.2, 2.5
• Identifies the location of the Karaoke Box
1
Sample answer:
It is located in front of Harajuku station.
Question 3
Outcomes assessed: 2.1, 2.2, 2.3, 2.4, 2.5, 2.6
• Demonstrates comprehensive understanding of how Tom felt
• Supports the answer with appropriate references to the text
• Demonstrates good understanding of how Tom felt
• Supports the answer with references to the text
• Identifies some relevant information
3
2
1
Sample answer:
Yes, I think Tom had a very good time on Sunday because he wanted try Karaoke and
he loves singing so Keiko took him to a karaoke box. The Karaoke Box had a lot of
English songs and delicious food and Tom sang for 3 hours so it is likely that he had a
good time.
Question ４
Outcomes assessed: 2.1, 2.2, 2.3, 2.4, 2.5, 2.6
• Demonstrates comprehensive understanding of the texts
• Supports the answer with appropriate references to both texts
• Demonstrates good understanding of the texts
• Supports the answer with some references to the text/s
• Demonstrates some understanding of the texts
• Provides isolated information
4-5
3
2
1
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Sample answer:
While Kenji enjoyed the concert, he probably did not enjoy his weekend overall as
much as Keiko. He says it was terrible getting to the concert and as it was outside and
it rained, it was cold. Furthermore, he was not very impressed with the venue and its
facilities.
On the other hand, Keiko appears to have had a better weekend than Kenji. The
Karaoke Box she took Tom to had lots of English songs and they enjoyed the food.
Although Keiko had to endure Tom’s terrible singing, she says she was happy
because Tom looked very happy. Therefore Keiko’s weekend was, overall, successful.
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Writing in Japanese
Language: Japanese Beginners
Target group: Year 12
Marks: 20
Weighting: 20%
Date: Term 3 Year 12
Syllabus topics:
Friends, recreation and pastimes; People places and communities; Education and work
Component(s):
Writing 20%
Context
Students have completed the above topics and are now revising these topics including more advanced
structures.
Tasks
• In Writing Part A Question 1, students are to respond to an email recommending a good restaurant
for visitors from Japan. The email is to be written in Japanese and approximately 100 ji.
• In Writing Part A Question 2, students are to read the information given about an apartment and
write an email of approximately 150 ji in Japanese to their Japanese friend.
• In Writing Part B, students choose either Question 3 or Question 4, and write an extended response
of approximately 250 ji in Japanese.
Outcomes to be assessed
A student:
1.1 establishes and maintains communication in Japanese
1.2 manipulates linguistic structures to express ideas effectively in Japanese
1.3 sequences ideas and information
1.4 applies knowledge of the culture of Japanese-speaking communities to interact appropriately
3.1 produces texts appropriate to audience, purpose and context
3.2 structures and sequences ideas and information
3.3 applies knowledge of diverse linguistic structures to convey information and express original ideas in
Japanese
Marking criteria
Students will be assessed on their ability to:
• understand, draw conclusions and interpret the gist and specific information from a text
• apply a range of vocabulary and linguistic structures within the contexts
• manipulate linguistic structures to express ideas effectively in Japanese
• structure information and ideas coherently
• produce a text for a specific audience, purpose and context
Feedback
• Teacher will provide oral and written feedback on the task. Written feedback will be in the form of
annotations on the task.
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Writing Part A
Question 1 (4 marks)
A Japanese exchange student who is at your school has sent you an email asking for
advice on a good restaurant nearby as his parents are coming from Japan. Write an
email in response. Write approximately 100ji in Japanese.
Sample answer
Text type is made clear by having an
addressee (although this is not
necessary in an email).
Good use of kanji for name - kanji that
may otherwise not be used.
Good descriptive language using
combination of adjectives.
友子さんへ、
Shows knowledge of the
conventions of the writing
system by using katakana for
borrowed words.
学校のちかくにやすくて、おいしいスペインりょうりのレストランがありま
す。毎週、金よう日にはフラメンコのダンスのショーがあります。ごはんを
食べながら、ショーを見ることができます。行ってみてください。
キムより
Good use of prescribed
prescribed kanji throughout
the composition.
Signing off with own
name is consistent with
email text type.
Use of particular
syllabus structures
(shaded) to achieve
a specific purpose.
General comment
Response is of a good length satisfying the 100 ji length requirement and uses
conventions for the email text type. Student has been thorough in the use of
prescribed syllabus kanji and accurate spelling of katakana words. A variety of
syllabus structures has been used which makes the writing interesting and shows the
student’s competency in the use of prescribed grammar. The response is structured in
a coherent and appropriate way for this task and the question has been answered well.
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Writing Part A
Question 2 (6 marks)
You have finished your HSC and are living in Japan and attending Waseda University.
You have found a new apartment. See the real estate advertisement for it below.
Write an email to your Japanese friend about your new apartment. Write
approximately 150ji in Japanese.
シャワー
トイレ
キッチン
まど
さつきアパート
わ
せ
だ
早稲田大学のちかく
えき
おしいれ
まど
わしつ
駅
バスてい
買い物
おふろ
一ヶ月
五分
三分
べんり
なし
五万七千円
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Sample answer
Good use of
prescribed kanji
for name
Good introduction of topic of
email i.e. writing about new
apartment.
海くんへ、
Demonstrates understanding of
the information given in the
stimulus text by incorporating
into response.
元気ですか。あたらしいアパートをみつけました。おふろがないけど、あか
るくていいへやです。キッチンにまどがあって、こうえんが見えます。だか
Correct
use of
particle
ら、そとを見ながらごはんをつくることができます。大学や、アルバイトに
ちかいから、べんりです。来週の土曜日にひっこすつもりです。
こんどあそびに来てください。
ジェーンより
Applies knowledge of syllabus
structures (shaded) to create a complex
structure e.g. two syllabus structures
bi d
Effective and
informative text
incorporating
own ideas
showing
creativity
General comment
Student has responded in the required text type (email). The use of ~へ and
~より are not required in an email but their use has made the text type explicit; i.e. a
letter or an email (in this case an email). The student has shown understanding of the
conventions of the Japanese writing system by using a variety of appropriate scripts.
A number of syllabus structures has been used accurately indicating a thorough
knowledge and understanding of prescribed syllabus grammar. The student has also
shown consistent use of prescribed kanji.
In addition, the student has responded to selected information presented in the
stimulus text. It is important to note, that where there is stimulus text given in the
question, students must show they have understood the information presented by
incorporating selected parts in their response.
The student had also shown creativity by presenting original ideas that are appropriate.
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Writing Part B (10 marks)
Question 3
あなたは去年、一年間日本にりゅう学していました。今年１２年生としての
せいかつについて、ホストのお母さんにてがみをかいてください。
You spent last year as an exchange student in Japan. Write a letter to your host
mother about your life as a Year 12 student this year.
Write approximately 250ji in Japanese.
OR
Question 4
あなたはあたらしいアルバイトをはじめました。はじめての日について、
日本人の友だちに、てがみをかいてください。
You have just started a new part-time job at a Japanese restaurant. Write a letter to
your Japanese friend about your first day.
Write approximately 250ji in Japanese.
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Writing Part B (10 marks)
Question 3
あなたは去年、一年間日本にりゅう学していました。今年１２年生としての
せいかつについて、ホストのお母さんにてがみをかいてください。
You spent last year as an exchange student in Japan. Write a letter to your host
mother about your life as a Year 12 student this year. Write approximately 250ji in
Japanese.
Sample answers
Starting off by writing the
addressee shows that it is a letter
お母さんへ
お元気ですか。私は元気です。先週、学校がはじまりました。
今年は、１２年生です。１０月にしけんがあるから、がんばるつもりです。
学校では、えい語、すうがく、おんがく、かがくと日本語をべんきょうして
います。日本語が一ばんやさしいです。かがくは、むずかしいから好きじゃ
ないです。毎日たくさんのしゅくだいをしなければなりません。週まつは、
アルバイトをしたり、べんきょうしたりします。
しけんがおわったあとで、日本に行きたいと思います。お母さんは、どう思
いますか。じゃ、きょうは、これで。お父さんと、ゆうじくんによろしく。
Good content. Student uses
a variety of syllabus
structures (shaded) as well
as using all prescribed
Very authentic closing
statement
ジェシーより
二月十五日
Writing the date at
the end shows that it
is a letter rather than
an email.
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Writing Part B (10 marks)
Question 4
あなたはあたらしいアルバイトをはじめました。はじめての日について、
日本人の友だちに、てがみをかいてください。
You have just started a new part-time job at a Japanese restaurant. Write a letter to
your Japanese friend about your first day. Write approximately 250ji in Japanese.
Sample answer
~さんへ clearly
shows the text type
being used, i.e. a
letter
けんさんへ、
Excellent use of
prescribed kanji and
variety of syllabus
structures (shaded)
こんにちは！お元気ですか。私は元気です。今日、日本りょうりのレストラ
ンでアルバイトをはじめました。ノースシドニーのえきのちかくにあって、
名前は、さくらといいます。とてもたのしかったけど、いそがしかったです。
私はウエイトレスのしごとをしたり、おみせのそうじをしたりしました。日
本人のおきゃくさんと、日本語で、すこし話すことができました。しごとが
おわったあとで、おいしい日本のおちゃをのんでもいいんです。ラッキー！
毎週土よう日にアルバイトをするつもりです。また、てがみをかきます。
Long sentence with two
syllabus structures, i.e. a
complex sentence
~より and the
date at the end is
the standard way
of finishing off a
letter
カイリーより
２月７日
General comment
Both responses are of good length, approximately 250ji.
Both have followed conventions for the text type required, a letter. In a letter, there
are usually opening and closing statements as well as a date at the end. Opening
statements such as お元気ですか is customary.
A variety of appropriate vocabulary and syllabus structures has been used throughout
the compositions. Consistency has been shown in the use of prescribed kanji. Students
have organised their ideas and presented the information in a logical and coherent
manner that is easy to read.
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Writing in Japanese
Part A (4 marks)
Question 1
Outcomes assessed: 1.1, 1.2, 1.3, 1.4, 3.1, 3.2, 3.3
Marking guidelines
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Criteria
Communicates ideas and information appropriate to audience,
purpose and context
Applies knowledge of vocabulary, language structures and
features to the task
Demonstrates good control of the conventions of the Japanese
writing system
Communicates with some awareness of audience, purpose and
context
Demonstrates some knowledge of vocabulary, language
structures and features
Demonstrates some control of the conventions of the Japanese
writing system
Produces some comprehensible language related to the task
Marks
4
2-3
1
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Writing in Japanese
Part A (6 marks)
Question 2
Outcomes assessed: 1.1, 1.2, 1.3, 1.4, 3.1, 3.2, 3.3
Marking guidelines
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Criteria
Communicates relevant ideas and information appropriate to
audience, purpose and context
Organises information and ideas coherently
Applies knowledge of a variety of vocabulary, language
structures and features to the task
Demonstrates excellent control of the conventions of the
Japanese writing system
Communicates with some awareness of audience, purpose and
context
Organises ideas and information
Demonstrates knowledge of vocabulary, language structures
and features
Demonstrates good control of the conventions of the Japanese
writing system
Demonstrates some understanding of the requirements of the
task
Demonstrates limited evidence of the ability to organise ideas
Demonstrates some knowledge of vocabulary, language
structures and features
Demonstrates some control of the conventions of the Japanese
writing system
Produces some comprehensible language related to the task
Marks
6
4-5
2-3
1
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Writing in Japanese
Part B (10 marks)
Questions 3/4
Outcomes assessed: 1.1, 1.2, 1.3, 1.4, 3.1, 3.2, 3.3
Marking guidelines
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Criteria
Presents and develops original ideas and information and/or
opinions relevant to context, purpose and audience
Organises information and ideas coherently
Demonstrates knowledge of a variety of vocabulary, language
structures and features
Demonstrates excellent control of the conventions of the
Japanese writing system
Presents and develops original ideas, information, and/or
opinions mostly relevant to context, purpose and audience
Organises information and ideas
Demonstrates some knowledge of a variety of vocabulary,
language structures and features
Demonstrates good control of the conventions of the Japanese
writing system
Presents and develops some ideas, information, and/or opinions
relevant to context, purpose and audience
Organises information and ideas with some coherence
Demonstrates some knowledge of vocabulary, language
structures and features
Demonstrates some control of the conventions of the Japanese
writing system
Presents some information relevant to the task
Demonstrates elementary knowledge of vocabulary, languages
structures and features
Uses some kanji appropriately
Produces some comprehensible language related to the task
Marks
9-10
7-8
5-6
3-4
1-2
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