Before Reading My Papa’s Waltz Poem by Theodore Roethke I Ask My Mother to Sing Poem by Li-Young Lee Grape Sherbet Poem by Rita Dove Who lives in your MEMORY? RL 1 Cite textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text. RL 4 Analyze the cumulative impact of specific word choices on meaning and tone. What are some of your most vivid family memories? They might include a raucous pillow fight with your sister or a rained-out picnic with your cousins. These memories can take a special shape in your mind; some might linger as stories to tell, but others might remain simply a series of images. The following poems contain such images, boiled down to their essential qualities. QUICKWRITE Choose a memory involving someone close to you and write a brief sketch of your recollection. Include sensory details as well as events that present a clear picture of your subject. 748 Meet the Authors Theodore Roethke poetic form: lyric poetry These three poems are all examples of lyric poetry, brief poems in which the speakers share personal thoughts and feelings on a subject. In ancient Greek, the word lyric referred to a type of poetry that expressed the feelings of a single singer, accompanied by a lyre, a small harplike instrument. Though no longer sung, lyric poems have a lot in common with songs, including • a sense of rhythm and melody • imaginative word choice, or diction • the creation of a single, unified impression 1908–1963 Self-Taught Poet Theodore Roethke learned to write verse by imitating other poets; he sought inspiration from his notebooks, where he had recorded his thoughts, ughts, feelings, and observations. ns. He went on to earn a Pulitzer er Prize and two National Book Awards. He once advised his readers ders to “listen” to his poems, “for they are written to be heard.” Read the poems aloud to experience the sounds of the language. Li-Young Lee text analysis: imagery One of the most important elements of any poem is its imagery—the words and phrases that appeal to one or more of the five senses. In addition to re-creating sensory experiences, however, imagery calls up particular ideas and emotions. In the following lines from “My Papa’s Waltz,” the imagery appeals to sight and hearing but also suggests certain feelings: We romped until the pans Slid from the kitchen shelf born 1957 Son of Chinese Exiles After his parents fled China to escape political p persecution,, Li-Young Lee’s family lived in several Asian countries before arriving in the United States in 1964. After college, Lee began to write poetry—about love, family, and ordinary experiences. These lines call up a sense of rowdy, out-of-control playtime. reading skill: make inferences Lyric poems tend to be very condensed; in many cases, more is suggested than directly stated. It’s important, then, to make inferences about their meanings. Think about the ideas and emotions suggested by the poet’s word choices and the poem’s images. As you read each poem, write down the images and your inferences on a chart like the one shown. “Grape Sherbet” Image My Associations Inference “[Memorial Day] morning we galloped / through the grassedover mounds / and named each stone / for a lost milk tooth.” • Memorial Day commemorates the dead. They are running through a cemetery. Rita Dove born 1952 Poet Laureate Rita Dove’s first attempts as a writer came early: in third or fourth grade, she composed a science-fiction novel based on her classroom spelling lists. Herr poetry collections have won many awards, s, including a Pulitzer Prize in 1987. From 1993 to 1995, she served as U.S. .S. poet laureate. Asked to name the most important quality for success, s, Dove replied, “I think that without imagination, we can go nowhere.” • Grassy mounds and stones are found in cemeteries Authors Online Complete the activities in your Reader/Writer Notebook. Go to thinkcentral.com. KEYWORD: HML9-749 749 My Papa’s Waltz theodore roethke The whiskey on your breath Could make a small boy dizzy; But I hung on like death: Such waltzing was not easy. 5 10 15 What are your impressions of the characters depicted in the painting? Cite the details that create this impression. We romped until the pans Slid from the kitchen shelf; My mother’s countenance1 Could not unfrown itself. The hand that held my wrist Was battered on one knuckle; At every step you missed My right ear scraped a buckle. You beat time on my head With a palm caked hard by dirt, Then waltzed me off to bed Still clinging to your shirt. a a LYRIC POETRY How does the speaker feel about his bedtime waltz with his father? Use details from the poem to help explain why you think as you do. 1. countenance: face or facial expression. 750 unit 7: the language of poetry Tender Moments (2000), Francks Deceus. Mixed media, 101.6 cm x 101.6 cm. Haitian. Private Collection. Photo © The Bridgeman Art Library. image of parent and child, figures not easily distinguished I Ask My Mother ing l i - yo u n g l e e Mother and Child by Grand Canal (2000), Hung Liu. Oil on canvas, 80˝ × 80˝. Courtesy Rena Bransten Gallery. She begins, and my grandmother joins her. Mother and daughter sing like young girls. If my father were alive, he would play his accordion and sway like a boat. 5 10 I’ve never been in Peking, or the Summer Palace, nor stood on the great Stone Boat to watch the rain begin on Kuen Ming Lake, the picnickers running away in the grass. b b Reread lines 5–9. How is the speaker able to describe images of a place he’s never seen? Describe the feelings evoked by the images. But I love to hear it sung; how the waterlilies fill with rain until they overturn, spilling water into water, then rock back, and fill with more. Both women have begun to cry. But neither stops her song. c IMAGERY c MAKE INFERENCES Why do the speaker’s mother and grandmother start to cry during their song? 752 unit 7: the language of poetry Grape Sherbet rita dove 5 10 15 20 25 30 The day? Memorial. After the grill Dad appears with his masterpiece— swirled snow, gelled light. We cheer. The recipe’s a secret and he fights a smile, his cap turned up so the bib resembles a duck. That morning we galloped through the grassed-over mounds and named each stone for a lost milk tooth. Each dollop of sherbet, later, is a miracle, like salt on a melon that makes it sweeter. Everyone agrees—it’s wonderful! It’s just how we imagined lavender would taste. The diabetic grandmother stares from the porch, a torch of pure refusal. d We thought no one was lying there under our feet, we thought it was a joke. I’ve been trying to remember the taste, but it doesn’t exist. Now I see why you bothered, father. e Ice Cream Dessert (1959), Andy Warhol. Photo © Andy Warhol Foundation/Corbis. © 2007 Andy Warhol Foundation for the Visual Arts/ARS, New York. d MAKE INFERENCES Reread lines 18–21. What does the image of the grandmother suggest about her actions? e LYRIC POETRY What feeling is the speaker expressing in this poem? i ask my mother to sing / grape sherbet 753 After Reading Comprehension 1. Recall In “My Papa’s Waltz,” why is the speaker’s mother frowning? 2. Clarify In “I Ask My Mother to Sing,” what is the mother’s song about? 3. Summarize Describe the setting of “Grape Sherbet” as you visualize it. Text Analysis 4. Make Inferences Review the charts you made as you read. What key inferences helped you understand each poem? What clues did you use to make these inferences? 5. Compare and Contrast In “My Papa’s Waltz” and “Grape Sherbet,” the speakers recall childhood memories. How are their experiences with their fathers alike? How are they different? Cite evidence from each poem to support your answer. 6. Interpret Imagery Reread lines 9–12 in “I Ask My Mother to Sing.” What idea is suggested by the image of the water lilies filling with water, spilling it into the lake, and filling up again? Consider the event described in the final stanza. 7. Analyze Lyric Poetry Review the definition of lyric poetry on page 749. Then identify the qualities of a lyric poem found in “I Ask My Mother to Sing.” 8. Make Judgments In “My Papa’s Waltz,” how do you judge the father’s behavior toward the speaker? Consider the word choices used in the descriptions as you cite evidence to support your answer. Text Criticism 9. Critical Interpretations In writing about “My Papa’s Waltz,” one critic remarked that Roethke reveals “something of his own joy, and bafflement, as the victim of his father’s exuberant energy.” Do you consider victim too harsh a word to describe the boy’s part in the evening waltz? Why or why not? Who lives in your MEMORY? What is your favorite way to share important family memories? 754 unit 7: the language of poetry RL 1 Cite textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text. RL 4 Analyze the cumulative impact of specific word choices on meaning and tone. Language grammar and style: Use Descriptive Language One way to add interesting details to your writing is by using participles and participial phrases. A participle is a verb form that acts as an adjective. Present participles, as in “the crying baby,” end in -ing, and past participles, as in “the freshly washed car,” often end in -ed. A participial phrase consists of a participle and its modifiers and complements. W 4 Produce explanatory writing in which the style is appropriate to the purpose and audience. L 1b Use various types of phrases to add interest to writing. Here is an example of Rita Dove’s use of participles in “Grape Sherbet”: Dad appears with his masterpiece— swirled snow, gelled light. (lines 3–4) Theodore Roethke uses a participial phrase in his poem “My Papa’s Waltz”: You beat time on my head With a palm caked hard by dirt (lines 13–14) Notice how the revisions in blue use participles to make this first draft more descriptive. Revise your response to the prompt below by using a similar technique. student model touching Li-Young Lee describes a sweet scene between mother and son. The son , deceased but not forgotten . shows an appreciation for his mother’s past and the memory of his father. reading-writing connection YOUR Increase your understanding of the family poems by responding to this prompt. Then use the revising tip to improve your writing. TURN writing prompt revising tip Extended Constructed Response: Analysis Review your response. How effectively did you use participles and participial phrases to add interesting details to your writing? What message does each poem convey about the relationship between parents and children? Write three to five paragraphs discussing the ways this relationship is depicted in the three poems. Interactive Revision Go to thinkcentral.com. KEYWORD: HML9-755 my papa’s waltz / i ask my mother to sing / grape sherbet 755
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