SOUND DEVICES SOUND DEVICES A good poem can often be identified by its sound quality. 1. How do we evaluate sound quality? Poets use certain devices to create sound within a poem. We need to analyze the poem to look out for these devices, indicate the sound produced and evaluate its effect on the reader. 2. What do poets use to create sound within a poem? There are four main devices: Alliteration Assonance Consonance Onomatopoeia 3. Purpose of using sound devices Sound devices are often used for three main reasons: To complement or emphasize the message of the poem. To create a mood. To reveal the speaker’s attitude. ALLITERATION WHAT IS ALLITERATION? Alliteration is the repetition of the same or similar consonant sounds in words that are close together. • Alliteration can create a musical effect or help establish a mood. Alliteration is the repetition of initial consonant sound in two or more neighboring words or syllables. Here are some examples: the wild winds of winter Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers. http://www.sil.org/lingualinks/literacy/otherresources/glossaryofliteracyterms/WhatIsAlliteration.htm LET’S LOOK AT ANOTHER EXAMPLE… WEATHER Whether the weather be fine Or whether the weather be not, Whether the weather be cold Or whether the weather be hot, We'll weather the weather Whatever the weather, Whether we like it or not. -- Anonymous WHAT IS THE PURPOSE OF ALLITERATION? The purpose of alliteration is to create a consistent pattern that catches the mind's eye and focuses attention. -http://www.techwr-l.com/techwhirl/archives/9810/techwhirl-9810-00362.html THE RAILROAD TRACKS RAN RIGHT THROUGH THE CENTER OF TOWN. Alliteration makes the reader read faster, thereby adding a sense of speed and intensity to the sentence. WriteGuide’s Letter Writing Program Stan the strong surfer saved several swimmers on Saturday. Tiny Tommy Thomson takes toy trucks to Timmy’s on Tuesday. ALLITERATIVE POEMS TEND TO BE TONGUE TWISTERS. THEY ARE WRITTEN FOR THE FUN THEY BRING WHEN THEY ARE READ! She sells seashells by the seashore! RULES FOR ALLITERATION Proper alliteration is NOT a repetition of letters; it is a repetition of sound. For example, never and knight alliterate because they begin with the same consonant sound. Conversely, even though tin and thank begin with the same letter, they do not alliterate because they don’t begin with the same consonant sound. ALLITERATION IS ALL AROUND US! Take some time to look around and notice… IN A STORY OR POETRY… Fresh Fish Do you like fresh fish? It's just fine at Finney's Diner. Finney also has some fresher fish that's fresher and much finer. But his best fish is his freshest fish and Finney says with pride, "The finest fish at Finney's is my freshest fish, French-fried!" "Oh say can you say" Dr. Seuss, 1979 IN SPORTS (SPORTS WRITERS REALLY LOVE ALLITERATION!)… ON BILLBOARDS IN ADVERTISING… ON THE WORLD WIDE WEB… RESTAURANTS ADVERTISE USING THE HELP OF ALLITERATION. PRODUCT ADVERTISING (ANOTHER HUGE USER OF ALLITERATION) BRAND NAMES STORE NAMES BIG BEARS BITING BERRIES 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. 11. 12. Dirty dogs _____________ in the dirt. _______________ cats cooking carrots. Five fish ________________ ______________snakes slithering Red rabbits __________________ ___________horses hauling hay Purple pandas ______________ pictures Creepy _______________ crawling Many mice ____________________ Tired ________________ talking Green gorillas ___________________ ___________ whales waiting in the water SUPER TONGUE TWISTER! Esau Wood sawed wood. Esau Wood would saw wood. Oh, the wood that Wood would saw! One day Esau Wood saw a saw saw wood as no other woodsaw Wood ever saw would saw wood. Of all the woodsaws Wood ever saw saw wood, Wood never saw a woodsaw that would saw wood like the woodsaw Wood saw would saw wood. Now Esau Wood saws with that saw he saw saw wood. EXAMPLES OF TONGUE TWISTERS Bertha Bartholomew blew big, blue bubbles. Elmer Elwood eluded eleven elderly elephants. Lila Ledbetter lugged a lot of little lemons. Vicky Vinc viewed a very valuable vase. You will : Make up two twisters about famous people with whom you are familiar. Make up two twisters about popular products you use. Make up one twisters about your favorite animal. Pick your favorite and illustrate it. ASSONANCE A ASSONANCE Repetition of vowel sounds followed by different consonants in stressed syllables, as in blade and maze. Repeated VOWEL sounds in a line or lines of poetry. Vowels = a, e, i, o, u Lake Fate Base (All share the long “a” sound.) Fade Assonance On this green bank, by this soft stream, We set today the votive stone; That memory may their deed redeem When, like our sires, our sons are gone. from “Concord Hymn” by Ralph Waldo Emerson ASSONANCE Examples “That solitude which suits abstruser musings” Samuel Taylor Coleridge “Hear the mellow wedding bells.” — Edgar Allen Poe “Dead in da middle of little Italy, little did we know that we riddled some middle men who didn't do diddily." – Big Pun WRITE DOWN THE EXAMPLE OF ASSONANCE IN EACH OF THE FOLLOWING: 1. “Slow the low gradual moan came in the snowing.” - John Masefield 2. “Shall ever medicine thee to that sweet sleep.” - William Shakespeare CONSONANCE CONSONANCE Repetition of similar consonant sounds at the ends of accented syllables, as in wind and sand. Repetition of a consonant sound that is not at the beginning of the word. A consonant is not a vowel. Consonance refers to fixed consonant but changing vowel sounds. For example, ‘escaped’ and ‘scooped’, ‘gored’ and ‘groaned’, ‘bestirred’ and ‘stared’. Consonance By the rude bridge that arched the flood, Their flag to April’s breeze unfurled, Here once the embattled farmers stood And fired the shot heard round the world. from “Concord Hymn” by Ralph Waldo Emerson EXAMPLE OF CONSONANCE “Rap rejects my tape deck, ejects projectile” - Fugees WRITE DOWN ALL ALLITERATION, ASSONANCE, AND CONSONANCE USED IN THE FOLLOWING POEM Nothing Gold Can Stay by Robert Frost Nature's first green is gold, Her hardest hue to hold. Her early leaf's a flower; But only so an hour. Then leaf subsides to leaf. So Eden sank to grief, So dawn goes down to day. Nothing gold can stay ONOMATOPOEIA WHAT IS ONOMATOPOEIA? Onomatopoeia is a sound device where the poet uses words to imitate real sound. Onomatopoeia is the use of a word whose sound imitates or suggests its meaning. These words help us form mental pictures about the things, people, or places that are described. WATCH VIDEO CLIP FROM http://www.watchknowlearn.org/Video.aspx?VideoID=14716&CategoryI D=2259 Examples buzz hiss roar woof bang pop sizzle •thump •rumble •Howl •swish •twitter •groan Onomatopoeia word that expresses sound… Zip, zoom, bang, boom ONOMATOPOEIA “The silken, sad, uncertain, rustling of each purple curtain . . .” Yeeeeee Ahhhhhhhh Swish swish swish Chug chug chug!! Glippp Gluppp Gluppp See how Danielle Caryl used onomatopoeia in her poem “Noises” on the next slide. NOISES BY DANIELLE CARYL The click of the clock, the creak of the stair, The squeak of a mouse and the swoosh of the air. The groan of the house as it settles below, And outside the window, the patter of snow. The scruff of the dog’s paws below where I rest, The rattle of the window that seems to face West. The jingle of bells from a wind chime next door The unearthly sounds of a truly loud snore. The crunching of snow under an animal’s feet, The honk of a horn from right down the street. So many noises I just want to weep, Is it too much to ask for some sleep? ONOMATOPOEIA POEMS Camping Crack! Crack! The fire crackles under the stars. Sizzle! Sizzle! The water sizzles above the fire. Crunch! Crunch! The campers crunching on potato chips. Click! Clack! Click! Clack! The tent poles clicking and clacking together. Rustle! Rustle! As we prepare our sleeping bags to go to sleep. Chirp! Chirp! The crickets say, “good-night”. The Game Clap! Clap! Stomp! Stomp! Swish! Swish! This is the way we get through Our games. The crowd shouts, ”Yahoo!” The ball soars through the air. Then, bounce, bounce, bounce. The audience holds its breath. SWISH! The ball goes in; We win! http://www.mywordwizard.com/onomatopoeiapoems.html YOU WILL NOW WRITE ONE ONOMATOPOEIA POEM. Have fun. Be creative. Add a drawing to complete your poem. Make sure to include lots of onomatopoeia words. Underline all of your examples of onomatopoeia. REPETITION Repetition Repetition is the repeating of sounds, syllables, words, phrases, lines and verses that appear in a work. •As a sound effect, repetition can create rhythm or enhance a mood or emotional effect. •Often repetition is used to show urgency or importance. If only, If only The ringing of the bells, bells, bells Repetition I’ve known rivers: Ancient, dusky rivers. My soul has grown deep like rivers. from “The Negro Speaks of Rivers” by Langston Hughes EXAMPLE OF REPETITION The woods are lovely, dark and deep, But I have promises to keep, And miles to go before I sleep, And miles to go before I sleep. From “Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening” by Robert Frost RHYME RHYME Words sound alike because they share the same ending vowel and consonant sounds. LAMP STAMP Share the short “a” vowel sound (A word always rhymes with itself.) Share the combined “mp” consonant sound TYPES OF RHYME • end rhyme • internal rhyme END RHYME Most common rhyme pattern used by poets. End words of lines rhyme Lines may rhyme by: 1. consecutive lines 2. alternate lines 3. more distant lines A single poem may use many variations. End rhymes usually follow a regular pattern within a poem, called its rhyme scheme. END RHYME Hector the Collector Collected bits of string. Collected dolls with broken heads And rusty bells that would not ring. End Rhyme Love is not all: it is not meat nor drink Nor slumber nor a roof against the rain; Nor yet a floating spar to men that sink And rise and sink and rise and sink again . . . a b a b from “Sonnet XXX” by Edna St. Vincent Millay . WRITE DOWN THE RHYME SCHEME He clasps the crag with crooked hands; Close to the sun in lonely lands, Ringed with the azure world, he stands. A A A From “The Eagle” by Alfred, Lord Tennyson WRITE DOWN THE RHYME SCHEME A Sunset and evening star, B And one clear call for me! And may there be no moaning of the bar, A When I put out to sea B From “Crossing the Bar” by Alfred, Lord Tennyson INTERNAL RHYME INTERNAL RHYME A word inside a line rhymes with another word on the same line. Once upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered weak and weary. From “The Raven” by Edgar Allan Poe Internal Rhyme Unwarmed by any sunset light The gray day darkened into night, A night made hoary with the swarm And whirl-dance of the blinding storm, As zigzag, wavering to and fro, Crossed and recrossed the wingëd snow: from Snow-Bound: A Winter Idyll by John Greenleaf Whittier WRITE DOWN THE INTERNAL RHYME And I had done a hellish thing And it would work ‘em woe: For all averred, I had killed the bird That made the breeze to blow. Ah wretch! said they, the bird to slay, That made the breeze to blow. From “The Rime of the Ancient Mariner” by S. T. Coleridge RHYTHM RHYTHM The beat created by the sounds of the words in a poem Rhythm can be created by meter, rhyme, alliteration and refrain. RHYTHM Rhythm refers to the beat, or the pattern of stresses, which occur in poetry. For a poem to have rhythm, it has to be read following a pattern with its syllables. For example: da, da, dadada da da, da, da, dadada da da, da, da, dadada da da, da, da, dadada da da. Usually, we can feel the rhythm best when we read aloud. We can mark the beats, or stresses and thus, see the pattern built in by the poet. Usually, we mark the stresses in a line of poetry with a small sloping dash above the accented syllable. EXAMPLE OF RHYTHM Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall Humpty Dumpty had a great fall and of all the king’s horses and all of the King’s men couldn’t put Humpty Dumpty together again. PRACTICE YOUR RHYTHM Clankity Clankity Clankity Clank! Ankylosaurus was built like a tank, Its hide was a fortress as sturdy as steel, It tended to be an inedible meal. It was armored in front, it was armored behind, There wasn’t a thing on its minuscule mind, It waddled about on its four stubby legs, Nibbling on plants with a mouthful of pegs. Ankylosaurus was best left alone, Its tail was a cudgel of gristle and bone, Clankity Clankity Clankity Clank! Ankylosaurus was built like a tank. By: Jack Prelutsky MORE RHYTHM PRACTICE Iguanodon, Iguanodon, Whatever made you fade, You’ve traveled on, Iguanodon, We wish you could have stayed. Iguanodon, Iguanodon, We’ve sought you everywhere, Both here and yon, Iguanodon, But failed to find you there. Iguanodon, Iguanodon, You were a gentle kind, But now you’re gone, Iguanodon, And left your bones behind. By: Jack Prelutsky METER METER A pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables. When poets write in meter, they count out the number of stressed (strong) syllables and unstressed (weak) syllables for each line. Then they repeat the pattern throughout the poem. METER FOOT - unit of meter. A foot can have two or three syllables. Usually consists of one stressed and one or more unstressed syllables. Rhythm and Meter ˘ he ´ was ˘ ´always ˘ ´quietly ˘ ´ ˘ arrayed, ´ And ˘ he ´ was ˘ always ´ ˘ ´human ˘ when ´ ˘ he´ talked. And from “Richard Cory” by Edwin Arlington Robinson The End http://languagearts.pppst.com/alliteration.html mrdmorton.com/powerpoints/Alliteration_Consonance_Assonance.ppt http://www.ereadingworksheets.com/figurative-language/poetic-devices/
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