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39 You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen-friend
Jane who writes:
… Yesterday my Mum asked me to help her about the house. We
were very busy with cleaning up after the birthday party the whole
morning. I got quite tired and even missed my fitness class. What
are your family duties, if any? Is there anything you especially like or
dislike about house work? Do you find helping your parents
necessary, why or why not?
Oh, I have some great news! I got a lovely kitten for my birthday...
Write a letter to Jane.
In your letter
- answer her questions
- ask 3 questions about her kitten
Moscow
Russia
24/04/15
Dear Jane,
Thanks for your last letter! I was happy to get it. Sorry, I haven’t written
for so long but I was busy with my schoolwork.
Well, you asked me about my household chores. Personally, I wash up,
clean up, and vacuum. Mainly, I enjoy doing this because it helps me to
relax and makes me forget my problems for a while. However,
vacuuming is pretty annoying as it makes lots of noise. Besides, helping
parents about the house is important because I can gain some useful
skills that are necessary for the future life.
Anyway, congratulations on your kitten! What is its name? What breed
is it? Are you aware of how to take care of it?
Sorry, I’ve got to go now. My favourite TV series is on. Keep in touch.
Best wishes,
Alyona
Критерии:
K1 Решение коммуникативной задачи
K2 Организация текста
K3 Языковое оформление текста
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ИТОГО: 6 из 6
Комментарий эксперта:
Алена, отличный результат! Так держать!
Единственное замечание по поводу третьего вопроса: Are you aware of
how to take care of it? - это вопрос не про котенка, а про саму Джейн. Он,
конечно, не повлиял на результат, но на будущее возьми на заметку.
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Отправитель: Алёна
Дата отправки: 24.04.2015
Эксперт: Т. В. Щербакова
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