AQA Level 1/2 Certificates in Science Exemplification of command words

AQA Level 1/2 Certificates in Science
Exemplification of command words
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Contents
Biology Exemplars
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Chemistry Exemplars
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Physics Exemplars
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Introduction
This document contains a series of questions, students’ responses and examiners’
commentaries that exemplify the command words used in AQA’s question papers.
Examples have been selected to provide teachers with an insight into students’ misconceptions
when interpreting these command words.
These examples, used alongside the command word document, can be used to help clarify the
requirements of the command words to students.
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Biology exemplars
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Question
Biology exemplar 1
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Mark scheme
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Student response A
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Comments: The student has identified that the marathon runner has more slow fibres and
the sprinter has more fast muscle fibres, which are the two standard demand marks. They
have mentioned mitochondria but have not linked this to there being more slow muscle
fibres to be releasing more energy over a longer time period by aerobic respiration. They
have gained a mark for linking a large store of glycogen needed by the sprinter.
3 marks
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Student response B

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Comments: This student gained the first 3 marks easily for linking more slow muscle
fibres which depends on aerobic respiration leading to less lactic acid build up in a long
race. They have not identified more fast muscle fibres in a sprinter but do not link
hard exercise (rapid muscle contractions) with anaerobic respiration. There are three
possible ways to gain the final mark and the student has given two of these so the mark
could have been awarded for either more mitochondria in slow muscle fibres linked to
aerobic respiration or the large amounts of glycogen in the sprinter. This is a clear
logical answer and gains a total of 5 marks.
5 marks
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Question
Biology exemplar 2
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11
Mark scheme
General comment: This question asks the candidate to tell the story of a specification
as applied to this situation. As in all explanation questions the answer must give all the
steps and in a logical answer.
0 marks
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Student response A

Comments: The student has given a very vague answer which really only restates the
question. No specific points are made and so no marks gained.
0 marks
Student response B


Comments: The student knows that the order of the bases is a code and that this
specifies a particular protein. They did not take this a step further and say that a
different code would produce a different protein.
2 marks
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Student response C

Comments: This student gained 1 mark for the general mark that a change in the
order of bases changes the gene. The rest of the answer does not relate to the
question and gained no further marks.
1 mark
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Student response A
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Comments: This answer identifies the variation in mouth size but does not give the
reason as due to mutations. They do note that fish with different mouth sizes will be
selected due to different foods but do not link this to better survival in certain
conditions. They know that these alleles are passed on, but do not give the definition
of a new species as so different that they cannot interbreed with the other one. The
student gives every alternate point and so gains half marks for their explanation.
3 marks
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Student response B

Comments: This student shows some understanding as in the first sentence they give
the idea of separation but this is not enough to gain a mark. They also bring up the idea
of adaptation, but again show lack of knowledge of the specific mechanism as they infer
that they adapt themselves by having bigger mouths. One mark was awarded for the
next paragraph as it does infer that the fish with different mouth sizes survived better
in different parts of the lake.
1 mark
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Student response C
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Comments: Despite some repetition in this answer there are four points made. The idea
of variation in the mouth size within the fish population is made at the start of the
answer. Near the end of the answer it is clear that fish with different mouth sizes
survived in different parts of the lake, that they passed on their alleles and that
eventually they could not interbreed.
4 marks
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Question
Biology exemplar 3
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Mark scheme
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Student response A
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Comments: This student has given a full and logical explanation covering each point. They
have extended the explanation to include a reflex reaction but this was ignored.
6 marks
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Student response B
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Comments: Despite some confusion in this answer there are four steps in the correct
order that have allowed. These were, stimulation of a receptor, an electrical impulse, along
a sensory neurone and the impulse reaching the brain. Although initially the first neurone
was not named as a sensory neurone it is clearly shown in the flow chart at the bottom as a
sensory neurone and so the mark was awarded. The paragraph regarding synapses was too
confused to gain a mark.
4 marks
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Student response C
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Comments: All steps were described in the correct order except for the inclusion of
the spinal cord which gained 5 marks. The final point could have been awarded for
either the relay neurone or the signal reaching the brain. The candidate seems to be
aware that the motor neurone and effector are not part of this question as they have
put it in brackets.
5 marks
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Student response A

Comments: This response does not give either where the spine is damaged or the
reason we know.
0 marks
Student response B

Comments: The student gains the second mark for identifying that information
from receptors in the leg is not reaching the brain.
1 mark
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Student response C

Comments: This student gains the first mark as they have identified the
lower part of the spinal cord. However the idea of ‘nerves not working
correctly’ is insufficient for the second mark.
1 mark
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Question
Biology exemplar 4
Mark Scheme
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Generic Quality of Communication marking guidance
In Question X students are required to produce extended written material in English, and will be
assessed on the quality of their communication as well as the standard of the scientific response.
Students will be required to:
 use good English
 organise information clearly
 use specialist vocabulary where appropriate.
The following general criteria should be used to assign marks to a level:
Level 1: basic
• Knowledge of basic information
• Simple understanding
 The answer is poorly organised, with almost no specialist terms and their use
demonstrating a general lack of understanding of their meaning, little or no detail
• The spelling, punctuation and grammar are very weak.
Level 2: clear
• Knowledge of accurate information
• Clear understanding
• The answer has some structure and organisation, use of specialist terms has been
attempted but not always accurately, some detail is given
• There is reasonable accuracy in spelling, punctuation and grammar, although there may
still be some errors.
Level 3: detailed
• Knowledge of accurate information appropriately contextualised
• Detailed understanding, supported by relevant evidence and examples
• Answer is coherent and in an organised, logical sequence, containing a wide range of
appropriate or relevant specialist terms used accurately
• The answer shows almost faultless spelling, punctuation and grammar.
General Comment: This is another question asking for an explanation and so each step must
be given in the correct order. Students need to take what they have learned about
eutrophication and apply it to this situation. The mark scheme is based on criteria for each
level and so scientific points made do not relate directly to marks gained.
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Student response A
Comments: This student has written a detailed and logical account which gives most of the
key biological points. The answer fully reaches level 3 in both science knowledge and quality
of communication and so was awarded 6 marks.
6 marks
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Student response B
Comments: After an incorrect start referring to pesticides the student goes on to give a
reasonable description of eutrophication with many correct scientific points. However with
no reference to either decomposers or oxygen this is not a level 3 answer and so was
awarded 4 marks, the top of level 2.
4 marks
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Student response C
Comments: Although most of this answer is incorrect or irrelevant the student does make
two linked points. These are that a lack of light will stop photosynthesis and this will cause
the plants to die. The quality of communication was at least of level 1 standard and so 2
marks were awarded.
2 marks
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Biology exemplar 5
Question
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Mark scheme
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Student response A

Comments: The student has given the correct correlation between mean annual
temperature and body size in the first part of the question. However the reason
suggested does not relate to Bergmann’s data so only the first mark is awarded.
1 mark
Student response B

Comments: This answer also gives the correct correlation but the suggestion for why he
could not be completely sure his rule was correct was irrelevant and did not gain the
second mark.
1 mark
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Student response A



Comments: The student has identified all aspects of why the data partially, but
not totally support the rule. The use of ‘volume’, instead of ‘mass’ of the penguins
has been ignored.
3 marks
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Student response B


Comments: This answer has identified the Rockhopper penguins as the lightest and as
living near the Antarctic where it is colder which gains 2 marks. The first mark point
about the biggest living in the coldest region which does support the data was not
made.
2 marks
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Biology exemplar 6
Question
Mark scheme
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Student response A
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Comments: Despite having mixed up the actions of insulin and glucagon this candidate
gains 3 marks for identifying that insulin is secreted by the pancreas, that when blood
glucose levels are low glycogen is broken down to glucose, and that when blood glucose
levels are too high glucose is converted to glycogen.
3 marks
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Student response B





Comments: This is a logical answer making the five most straightforward points on
the mark scheme. The final mark was not gained as no reference was made to
glucose moving into cells or liver, or to glucose moving back into the blood when
glycogen is broken down.
5 marks
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Student response C


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



Comments: While on first reading this answer is very logical, it does contain two errors.
The first of these, that glucose moves into cells and is immediately stored as fat, is
ignored as eventually too much glucose will result in storage as fat. However the second,
that glucagon is secreted by the liver, means that the first mark for ‘hormones from the
pancreas cannot be answered despite the candidate stating that insulin comes from the
pancreas. Five correct points have been made for 5 marks.
5 marks
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Biology exemplar 7
Question
Mark scheme
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Student response A
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Comments: In this answer the student has identified the two most obvious points,
deterioration in diet and less exercise.
2 marks
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Student response B
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Comments: Again the two points made are about diet and exercise.
2 marks
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Student response C

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Comments: The student has linked a diet high in fats and a lack of exercise to rising
levels of obesity for 3 marks. A correct and succinct answer.
3 marks
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Chemistry exemplars
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Chemistry exemplar 1
Question
Mark scheme
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Student response A

Comments: In this question “it” is taken to mean phosphine, and a mark is gained for the
statement “it has a simple molecular structure”. In the rest of the answer it is not clear which
bonds are being referred to and so no further marks are gained. There is no reference to
covalent bonds being weak, and so the mark awarded is not negated.
1 mark
Student response B

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
Comments: A very good response that covers all of the points on the mark scheme.
3 marks
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Student response C
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
Comments: The student does not make it clear which bonds are strong, but gains a mark for
“intermolecular forces” and a second mark for “that can be easily overcome”. The student then
repeats the information in the question, adding “low melting and boiling point”, which is the
same idea, but does not make the link to the energy required, which is the third marking point.
In explanations, students often simply repeat the information they have been given without
adding value, thinking they have completed the explanation.
2 marks
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Chemistry exemplar 2
Question
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Mark scheme
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Student response A
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
Comments: The student has stated that the anode is made of carbon, gaining the first mark.
The equation for the reaction at the anode is correct and gains the second mark. The next
sentence is confusing, because the student refers to oxygen ions rather than oxide ions or
possibly oxygen molecules. This was not a sufficiently serious error to justify withholding a
mark. The student gains the final two marks for the correct equation for the production of
carbon dioxide and refers to the carbon anode wearing away and carbon dioxide gas being lost
to the atmosphere.
4 marks
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Student response B
 
Comments: The student begins by referring to the formation of aluminium at the cathode,
which is not relevant. The student then refers to oxygen ions forming “as they lose electrons.”
The student states that the “oxygen burns,” and the explanation is confused, thinking that the
electronic current causes “the oxygen and carbon anode to react and consequently burn.”
There is no mention of carbon dioxide gas. The student gains marking points one and three.
2 marks
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Student response C

Comments: The student gains one mark for the formation of carbon dioxide but no further
marks. There is no mention of the anodes being made of carbon, that oxygen is produced or
that the anodes react with oxygen.
1 mark
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Chemistry exemplar 3
Question
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Mark scheme
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Student response A
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
Comments: The student begins by describing how to measure the volume of acid which is not
necessary as it is already given in the apparatus. The use of a white tile gains one mark. Adding
the alkali dropwise is correct, but it is not the acid that changes colour and the colour change
to pink or red is not specified, so this mark is not awarded. The measurement on the burette is
not the concentration of the alkali. It is correct that the result is read at eye level from the
bottom of the meniscus and so a second mark is gained.
2 marks
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Student response B
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

Comments: The first statement is incorrect, because the burette is not used to measure
”25 cm3 of alkaline until it reaches the bottom of the meniscus line.” It should be filled with
the alkali until near or at zero. Adding the alkali dropwise would take a long time, but was
accepted for a mark. The student mentions swirling which gains one mark and having a white
tile gains a mark. There is no mention of the colour change at the end point. The safety
precaution is additional is additional information and does not gain credit.
3 marks
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Chemistry exemplar 4
Question
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Mark scheme
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Student response A
 
Comments: The student gains all three marks in the first sentence. The student goes on
to fill the answer space by explaining the difference between reproducibility and
repeatability, which was not required in this question. Giving additional information can
be risky if it contradicts a response, but in this case there is no contradiction.
3 marks
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Student response B
 
Comments: The student suggests taking more readings at more temperatures, which
would not improve accuracy and there is no mention of calculating a mean. The student
appears to have not read the question
completely,
or has
Student
response
C misunderstood “the volume of
gas at each temperature.”
0 marks
Student response C


Comments: The student is unsure and the first suggestion is incorrect. However the
student does suggest repeating the experiment three times at every temperature and
then recording an average for each temperature.
2 marks
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Chemistry exemplar 5
Question
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Mark scheme
8(c)
6
Marks awarded for this answer will be determined by the Quality of Communication (QoC) as well
as the standard of the scientific response. Examiners should also refer to the information on page
5, and apply a ‘best-fit’ approach to the marking.
0 marks
No relevant content.
Level 1 (1–2 marks)
Level 2 (3–4 marks)
Level 3 (5–6 marks)
There are statements
about the conditions
used. There is no
correct explanation of
the link between rate
or yield and the
conditions.
There is a correct
explanation of the
conditions used that
links the conditions to
rate or yield.
There is an explanation
covering at least
temperature and
pressure, which shows
understanding of the
compromise between
rate and yield.
examples of chemistry points made in the
response:
200 atmospheres pressure
 high pressure gives a high yield of
ammonia
 too high a pressure causes risk of
explosion

high pressure costly to maintain

a high pressure will cause the rate to be
higher

4 moles of gas become 2 (or fewer moles
of gas in products)
450C
 high temperature increases the rate of
reaction

optimum temperature

(forward reaction is exothermic so) a high
yield of ammonia requires a low
temperature
but too low a temperature causes the rate
of reaction to be too slow
iron catalyst
 a catalyst speeds up the reaction
 an iron catalyst allows a lower
temperature to be used (saving energy
and causing a higher yield)
 iron catalyst increases the rate of reaction
equally in both reactions
others
 compromise conditions
 unreacted nitrogen and hydrogen is
recycled

Total
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Generic Quality of Communication marking guidance
In Question X students are required to produce extended written material in English, and will be
assessed on the quality of their communication as well as the standard of the scientific response.
Students will be required to:
 use good English
 organise information clearly
 use specialist vocabulary where appropriate.
The following general criteria should be used to assign marks to a level:
Level 1: basic
• Knowledge of basic information
• Simple understanding
 The answer is poorly organised, with almost no specialist terms and their use
demonstrating a general lack of understanding of their meaning, little or no detail
• The spelling, punctuation and grammar are very weak.
Level 2: clear
• Knowledge of accurate information
• Clear understanding
• The answer has some structure and organisation, use of specialist terms has been
attempted but not always accurately, some detail is given
• There is reasonable accuracy in spelling, punctuation and grammar, although there may
still be some errors.
Level 3: detailed
• Knowledge of accurate information appropriately contextualised
• Detailed understanding, supported by relevant evidence and examples
• Answer is coherent and in an organised, logical sequence, containing a wide range of
appropriate or relevant specialist terms used accurately
• The answer shows almost faultless spelling, punctuation and grammar.
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Student response A
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Comments: The student has correctly explained the effect of pressure, temperature and the
catalyst on the rate of the reaction. However the effects on the yield of ammonia are
incorrect. Although there is a correct statement that an increase in pressure will favour the
side “with the least molecules”, the student thinks this would produce less ammonia. For
temperature, the student has correctly stated that an increase favours the endothermic
reaction, but states that this reduces the yield. The answer is reasonably clearly written with
some minor errors in spelling, punctuation and grammar. The response is Level 2.
4 marks
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Student response B






Comments: The student has given a correct explanation covering the effects of temperature,
pressure and a catalyst on the rate of reaction and the yield of ammonia. The student
understands the need for a compromise temperature. The answer is written clearly with good
spelling, punctuation and grammar. This matches the Level 3 descriptor.
6 marks
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Student response C
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
Comments: This student begins by repeating the information in the question without adding
any value. The explanation of the role of the catalyst, although partially correct, does not
make it clear that a catalyst increases the rate of reaction. The student thinks that a lower
temperature increases the rate. Although the effect of pressure on yield is correctly
stated the explanation is incorrect. This is a Level 1 response.
2 marks
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Chemistry exemplar 6
Question
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Mark scheme
question
answers
extra information
3(d)
mark
6
Marks awarded for this answer will be determined by the Quality of Communication (QoC)
as well as the standard of the scientific response. Examiners should also refer to the
information on page 4, and apply a ‘best-fit’ approach to the marking.
0 marks
No relevant
content
Level 1 (1–2 marks)
A simple relevant
comment has been
made on the data
from at least one of
the graphs.
Level 2 (3–4 marks)
Level 3 (5–6 marks)
At least two of the
graphs have been
considered with a
relevant comment
made.
All the graphs have
been considered and
relevant comments
made about each.
examples of chemistry points made in the
response:

(graph 1 shows) fluoride ions reduce
the amount of tooth decay

(graph 1 shows) the effect in reducing
tooth decay is greatest for 55-64 year
olds

(graph 2 shows) the fluoride ions
reduce percentage with decayed teeth

(graph 2 shows) effect is greatest at
2.5 to 3 mg per 1000 g of water then
decay increases if more than 2.5 to 3
mg of fluoride ions per 1000 g water

(graph 2 shows percentage) decay
decreases from 0 to 2.5 / 3 mg per
1000 g

(graph 3 shows) more marked / brittle
teeth as fluoride level increases

above points linked together to draw a
justified conclusion
Total
A justified conclusion
may be given.
extra information
accept any in range 55-64
accept any in range 2.5–3
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Generic Quality of Communication marking guidance
In Question X students are required to produce extended written material in English, and will be
assessed on the quality of their communication as well as the standard of the scientific response.
Students will be required to:
 use good English
 organise information clearly
 use specialist vocabulary where appropriate.
The following general criteria should be used to assign marks to a level:
Level 1: basic
• Knowledge of basic information
• Simple understanding
 The answer is poorly organised, with almost no specialist terms and their use
demonstrating a general lack of understanding of their meaning, little or no detail
• The spelling, punctuation and grammar are very weak.
Level 2: clear
• Knowledge of accurate information
• Clear understanding
• The answer has some structure and organisation, use of specialist terms has been
attempted but not always accurately, some detail is given
• There is reasonable accuracy in spelling, punctuation and grammar, although there may
still be some errors.
Level 3: detailed
• Knowledge of accurate information appropriately contextualised
• Detailed understanding, supported by relevant evidence and examples
• Answer is coherent and in an organised, logical sequence, containing a wide range of
appropriate or relevant specialist terms used accurately
• The answer shows almost faultless spelling, punctuation and grammar.
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Student response A
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


Comments: The student makes several relevant points, but the response lacks clarity and
detail in places. The student begins well with a clear statement about Graph 1. The second
sentence is presumably about Graph 2 and although it is correct that low concentrations
decrease the percentage of children with decayed teeth, the statement “only well at 2.5
concentration” is unclear and does not give the units of concentration. The third sentence is
unclear and together with the fourth sentence shows some misinterpretation of Graph 3. The
fifth sentence, beginning “Also,” is confusing. The student ends with a conclusion that is not
fully justified by the points made. Spelling and punctuation are good with somewhat limited use
of scientific terms. This is a Level 2 response.
4 marks
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Student response B





Comments: The student makes clear, relevant and detailed statements about each of the
graphs, correctly interpreting the information and supporting the statements with data. The
advantages and disadvantages are explained and although there is no justified conclusion, the
response is Level 3. The single spelling mistake “fluride” and the omission of units of
concentration were taken into consideration, but were not thought sufficient to warrant
withholding a mark.
6 marks
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Student response C



Comments: The student makes relevant comments about all three of the graphs. However, the
student uses “fluorine” throughout, so referring to the element rather than the ions and
misspelling the name. The comments are generally qualitative, lacking detail and show a simple
interpretation of the data. e.g. “the less fluorine the more tooth decay.” The account is clearly
written with only the one spelling mistake. It matches the criteria for Level 3 but is at the
lower limit.
5 marks
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Physics exemplars
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Physics exemplar 1
Question
76
Mark scheme
77
Student response A



Comments: The student has identified that the plank will rotate clockwise,
because the weight of the see-saw will create a clockwise moment making
the total clockwise moment exceed the total anticlockwise moment.
3 marks
Student response B

Comments: The student gets credit for stating that the plank will rotate clockwise, but
the reasoning is incorrect, so no other marks are scored.
1 mark
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Student response A

Student response B
Implied CM = ACM
 
Comments: The moment produced by the weight of the see-saw is not included, so the
student cannot complete the equation correctly. However working is shown that implies that
total clockwise moment is equal to the total anticlockwise moment so this gains credit.
1 mark
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Student response C
Worked out CM



Comments: This student correctly calculates the clockwise moment, but then incorrectly adds
another moment to this so cannot produce a correct equation for the total moments acting.
1 mark
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Question
Physics exemplar 2
Mark scheme
81
Student response A

Comments: This response is too vague to gain any credit.
0 marks
Student response B
3(c)

The black paper took in more energy from its
surroundings, warming up the icecube quicker. The
newspaper also took in more energy, but less than the
black paper, as matt surfaces absorb more heat energy,
and this melted the ice cube. The aluminium foil
reflected energy and didn’t absorb as much from its
surroundings. So it was slower to melt the ice cube.
With no insulation, the ice cube was exposed directly to
the heat energy from the room, so this heated it up very
quickly.


Comments: This student gains full credit by correctly comparing the relative absorption of
energy by all three materials.
3 marks
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Student response C


Comments: This student gains credit for the general ideas that shiny surfaces are
reflectors and dark, matt surfaces are absorbers. There is no mention of the specific
materials in this investigation.
2 marks
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Question
Physics exemplar 3
Mark scheme
84
Student response A


Comments: This student identifies that sound waves are longitudinal. The rest of the
response is an attempt to discuss diffraction that does not answer the question, so is not
worthy of credit.
1 mark
85
Student response B




Comments: This student gives three of the four creditworthy points, but does not
make any comparison of frequency or wavelength. This is an example of a compare
question.
3 marks
86
Student response C


Comments: There is a correct comparison of the frequency of the waves and a statement that
sound waves cannot travel through a vacuum.
2 marks
87
Question
Physics exemplar 4
Mark scheme
88
Student response A




Comments: This student states that a U-235 nucleus ‘reacts’ with a neutron, rather than
absorbing it, which does not gain a mark. The student then goes on to make three correct
statements describing nuclear fission.
3 marks
89
Student response B




Comments: There are five correct points given in this description, so it scores the
maximum four marks.
4 marks
Student response C



Comments: This student makes three statements describing nuclear fission.
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3 marks
Physics exemplar 5
Question
91
Mark scheme
92
Student response A


Comments: To gain full marks students were expected to calculate two values of velocity and
then round their values to two significant figures to match the measurements given in the table.
This student calculates both values correctly but rounds the values to three significant figures,
so does not gain the third mark.
2 marks
Student one is incorrect, the two trolleys travelled
a distance of 15 cm difference
Student 2 is correct
because the difference between the velocities is
negligible.Considering this, student 3 must also be
right as acceleration depends on velocity and time,
both of which we 
have established are practically
the same.
Comments: This student makes two correct statements with corresponding justifications,
so scores two marks.
2 marks
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Student response B


Comments: This student calculates the velocities correctly, but rounds the values to
four significant figures, so does not gain the third mark
2 marks

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Comments: This student makes three correct statements with corresponding
justifications. The incorrect reference to seconds, rather than m/s, is ignored here, so
the student scores three marks
3 marks
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Student response C
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Comments: This student confuses the values of time and distance when substituting into
the equation so does not gain any marks for the calculation. One mark is scored for
rounding the incorrect values to two significant figures when writing them in the table.
1 mark
Student 1’s prediction was incorrect because trolley
D travelled 65 cm 
however trolley E travelled 80 cm.
Student 2’s prediction was correct because the
average velocity for trolley D was 3.2 and the
 Student 3’s
average for trolley E was also 3.2.
prediction was wrong because the negative
acceleration for trolley D was 3.2/2.1 which is
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1.52m/s2 however trolley E was 3.2/2.6 which is 1.23
m/s2.
Comments: This student makes three correct statements with corresponding
justifications, so scores all three available marks.
3 marks
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Question
Physics exemplar 6
Mark scheme
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Student response A
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Comments: This student scores the first mark for the idea that the particles have ‘enough
energy’.
3 marks
Student response B
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Comments: The ideas here are confused, referring to lack of space and a change in the
pressure. There is nothing creditworthy.
0 marks
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Student response C
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Comments: This student scores the first mark for the idea that the particles have
‘enough energy’. The rest of the explanation is confused with references to ‘particles
becoming hotter and is not worth credit.
1 mark
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Question
Physics exemplar 7
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Mark scheme
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Generic Quality of Communication marking guidance
In Question X students are required to produce extended written material in English, and will be
assessed on the quality of their communication as well as the standard of the scientific response.
Students will be required to:
 use good English
 organise information clearly
 use specialist vocabulary where appropriate.
The following general criteria should be used to assign marks to a level:
Level 1: basic
• Knowledge of basic information
• Simple understanding
 The answer is poorly organised, with almost no specialist terms and their use
demonstrating a general lack of understanding of their meaning, little or no detail
• The spelling, punctuation and grammar are very weak.
Level 2: clear
• Knowledge of accurate information
• Clear understanding
• The answer has some structure and organisation, use of specialist terms has been
attempted but not always accurately, some detail is given
• There is reasonable accuracy in spelling, punctuation and grammar, although there may
still be some errors.
Level 3: detailed
• Knowledge of accurate information appropriately contextualised
• Detailed understanding, supported by relevant evidence and examples
• Answer is coherent and in an organised, logical sequence, containing a wide range of
appropriate or relevant specialist terms used accurately
• The answer shows almost faultless spelling, punctuation and grammar.
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Student response A
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Comments: This student states that readings should be taken from the voltmeter and
ammeter at different temperatures and describes how to calculate the resistance. There is
no mention of plotting a graph, or other appropriate representation of the results. The
answer has some structure. On a best-fit principle this response matches the level 2
descriptor.
4 marks
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Student response B
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Comments: The student describes the reading to be taken and how to calculate the
resistance. The account includes details of the range and interval of the temperature
readings and the need to record the results in a table. The description is coherent and has
an organized, logical sequence. There is sufficient detail for this to score a level 3 response.
5 marks
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Student response C
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Comments: There is a description of the method and how to calculate the resistance.
There is no further detail, nor description of the graph that should be plotted. The
answer has some structure, but the reference to the results showing a pattern is
vague. On a best-fit principle this response matches the level 2 descriptor.
3 marks
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