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WG202
Process Essay I ~ Assignment Sheet
Process Essay I ~ Compare & Contrast
Write an essay comparing and/or contrasting two things (A & B) across two (2) aspects
that they share.
For example, compare life in the city vs. life in the country in regards to health and
safety.
You can focus on the similarities between the two things or the differences between
two things.
Examples of Possible Topics
 Compare your life to the life your grandparents lived in two areas.
 Compare being single to being married in two areas.
The essay should be 400 words long, typed, and double-spaced using Arial font size
12. It should have 2 body paragraphs. The 1st line of each paragraph should be indented.
The essay should follow the compare & contrast organization patterns and use the
compare & contrast vocabulary that we discuss in class.
PC1 – D1
Friday,
3/27
PC1 – D2
Wednesday,
4/1
Conferences Monday
4/6
PC - final
3/24/2015
Thursday,
4/9
We will write draft #1 in the Lab (A + C in 112, B in
210). Teachers will collect them, read them, and then
send you feedback by Thursday, 1/24//13
Send draft #2 to your instructor
Conference schedule TBD
Monday begin at 10am / Tuesday at 9am
No WG class those mornings, but you still have to go to
Spelling!
Send final draft to your instructor
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WG202
Process Essay I ~ Assignment Sheet
Amarecan VS Korean
Every people like eating so I will talking about food. There so many differences
thing between Amareca food and korean food are time and taest.
First in amareca there have a lot of fast food. So they can make food very fast. For
example hambugar is popur in amareca because that food is very fast to make so they
Commented [FKR1]: The reader needs more information!
Food and culture are so interesting.
Don’t forget to write about different tastes, and culture and
food.
Commented [FKR2]: In academic writing, these words are
not possible.
Use ctrl+f to search for that problem everywhere in the
essay.
be fat. Next Korean food need time very much. In Korea we usually eat rice and soup ect.
Commented [FKR3]: This part needs more information.
The reader needs a lot of interesting information about food.
This is the most important part for this draft- please work on
this more. Add the background information.
We nood 30 minit for rice and more then one hours for soup. Korean food need a lot
Commented [FKR4]: Here there are just 2 differences out
of the many, so what word do you need?
time for food. But Korean food is slow food so it is healtier than fast food. But we have
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some bad thing. It is little bit expansive and we can not very fast.
Commented [FKR5]: What do you need in a topic
sentence?
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can save time. But the hambugar is not good at healty. If you eat a lot hambugar you will
Next thing is taest. In amareca they usually eat oily. They usually use oil very
much like pizza, chicken, and french fries ect. They are so delicious because they usually
made form oil. But that is not healty. So they do not have to eat usually. Next Korean
food is salty and spicy. Korean food need salt very much. Actually I do not that reason
How can you fix this topic sentence to show the main idea of
the whole essay?
Commented [FKR6]: The sentences before “next” and
after “next” have a relationship.
What is that relationship?
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What words can you use to show this relationship?
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and we usually using pepper very much so Korean food is very salty and spicy. For
Commented [FKR7]: “etc.” is not a word for writing. If
there are more examples, they should be in the paper. This
will make the paper more specific.
example kimchi is very popur food in korea that made cabbage and red pepper usually. I
Commented [FKR8]: What part fo speech is oily? --- use
the suffix “y” as a clue.
do not how to make. Actually kimchi is healty if you eat not to much but if you eat very
much it is not good for you because kimchi have a lot of salt.
Finally Amarean food is oily and do not need time very much. Korean food is
salty, spicy and need time very much.
What [art of speech do you need here for the object of “eat?”
How can yhou cange this:
Make 그 단어 “oily” a noun -- oil
Or add a noun like “oliy food.”
Commented [FKR9]: Here, what is “they?” Is there a more
specific word?
이러한 음식- maybe like this?
Not the people!
3/24/2015
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