Essay Outline Guide St. Theresa Catholic Secondary School English Department Title Page Title: centre of page the name of the published work used in your title should be underlined or put in italics title should be specific to the topic and reflective of the content Character Analysis of Atticus from the Novel To Kill a Mockingbird Style: student and teacher name along with course code and date should be placed on the right hand side of the page name of the school indicated along the bottom of the page, centered no graphics, colour or images used staple goes on upper left corner of the page no binders, duotangs or plastic covers font-Times New Roman size-12 point Student Name Teacher’s Name Course Code Date St. Theresa Catholic Secondary School Introductory Paragraph The introductory paragraph of a literary essay must include the following in the designated order. Samples are indicated within the brackets. 1. Topic Sentence--This sentence states the name of the literary piece being discussed, along with the author’s name and includes the basic focus of the essay. (In Lee’s novel To Kill a Mockingbird, Atticus Finch is a brave person.) 2. Define Terms--This sentence contains a brief explanation of the characteristic, or concept being discussed. (A brave person is someone who is not afraid to take a stand against something that he or she believes in regardless of the consequences.) 3. Topic Details--This is a very brief outline of what will be discussed in the essay. 4. Thesis Statement--The thesis statement is always the last sentence in the introductory paragraph. The thesis clearly states the purpose of the essay and or what will be proven. (The way in which Atticus helps and defends Tom regardless of the consequences demonstrates bravery.) The Body Each paragraph in the body of the essay must include the following. Note the samples within the brackets. 1. Topic Sentence--This sentence outlines what will be proven or discussed in the paragraph. (Atticus Finch is brave when he defends Tom Robinson at his trial.) 2. Connecting Sentence--Topic sentences after the first paragraph in the body are connecting sentences. The connecting sentence introduces the current paragraph and connects back to the previous paragraph. (Atticus not only showed bravery when he defended Tom, but also when he stood up to Bob Ewell.) 3. Background Details--These are the necessary and relevant details that lead up to the direct proof. 4. Direct Proof--This is the evidence that is required to support the thesis. Prior to the direct proof, it is important to introduce the speaker. The name of the speaker is stated followed by a colon. (Atticus says to Tom: ____.....) 5. Parenthetical documentation--This follows the direct proof indicating the last name of the author and the page number. The period goes after the closing bracket. (Lee 97). 6. Discussing The Direct Proof--How does this support the thesis? Explain how the direct proof proves the point being made in the body of the essay. 7. Concluding Sentence--This is a summary statement that reflects back to the main point of the body of the essay. It should always be linked back to the thesis. (Therefore, Atticus demonstrated bravery when he defended Tom during the trial when he knew it would cause hardships for himself and his family.) Conclusion 1. The concluding paragraph of the essay contains summary statements from each paragraph from the body of the essay. If there are four paragraphs in the body of the essay, there should be four summary statements. 2. The final sentence of the conclusion must reflect the thesis of the essay. Use of Quotations Format: Examples are indicated within the brackets. Always introduce the quotation by identifying the speaker. The name should be followed by a colon. (Atticus says:) Quotations must be copied exactly as shown in the text Quotation marks are used at the beginning and the end of the quotation (“….”). For a quotation within a quotation, single quotation marks are used inside the regular quotations (“’…………’”). Punctuation for the end of the sentence goes after the documentation brackets. No different script is required for quotes If your quotation is more than three typed lines, you must create a new margin on the left side of the page only. In keeping with the rest of the essay, the longer quotation will be double spaced. No quotation marks are used, unless someone is speaking. Parenthetical documentation occurs after the last word of the quote. An example of this is as follows: While in the courtroom during his closing arguments Atticus says: “I’m no idealist to believe firmly in the integrity of our courts and in the jury system-that is no ideal to me, it is a living, working reality. Gentlemen, a court is only as sound as its jury, and a jury is only as sound as the men who make it up. I am confident that you gentlemen will review without passion the evidence you have heard, come to a decision, and restore this defendant to his family. In the name of God, do your duty” (Lee 205). Use of Formal Language Use third person (he/she) not first person (I, me). Avoid the use of personal pronouns. Never use contractions. Write out numbers (except those referring to dates or large numbers). Italicize titles of books or plays. Use quotations marks for works from within a text. Use 12 point font. Use Times New Roman or a similar script. Double space entire work. Incorporate transitional words and sentences, (however, similarly) but avoid firstly, secondly, thirdly. Use the present tense if possible, but do not change tenses within a quotation. Use formal diction, no slang, short forms or contractions. Do not use colloquialisms or euphemisms. Indent each paragraph. Title of the essay should be on the title page only. Do not refer to your own essay (In this essay… or This quote proves…). Be consistent with singular and plural (students –they or student – he/she). Use editing sheet. Use essay planning sheet. Editing Checklist For An Essay Introductory Paragraph When editing, remember to check that the: $ introductory sentence identifies the literary work being discussed and the name of the author. $ introductory paragraph clearly states the purpose of the essay. $ terms used are clearly defined in your own words. $ thesis statement clearly states the purpose of the essay. $ thesis statement is the last sentence of the introductory paragraph. The Body When editing, remember to check that the: $ introductory sentences/connecting sentences state the purpose of each paragraph in the body of the essay. $ appropriate background information is provided. $ direct proof is introduced and proper punctuation used. (:) $ direct proof is written properly/proper format has been followed. $ there is parenthetical documentation/proper format has been followed (Lee 37) or (Shakespeare 1. 2. 23-25) $ direct proof has been explained. $ concluding sentences summarize key points made in paragraph. This sentence may begin with thus or therefore. Concluding Paragraph When editing, remember to check that the: $ main points of the essay made have been summarized. $ thesis statement has been reflected upon and a statement has been made. Other Things To Consider When editing, remember to check that the: $ spelling and grammar have been checked and corrected. $ each paragraph has been indented. $ tense is either past or present. $ numbers have been written out. $ periods have two spaces after them, commas have one space. $ there are no personal pronouns used. $ there are no contractions used. $ there is consistency between singular and plural. $ good copy is double spaced. $ proper title page format has been used. The title states the purpose of the essay and the name of the literary work being discussed. It is also centered on the page. $ proper font has been used. Essay Organizer Introductory Paragraph -Introductory sentence: -Define terms used (if applicable): -Details relevant to topic: -Thesis statement: Body-First Paragraph -Introductory sentence: -Background information: -Direct proof and parenthetical documentation: -Discussion of direct proof: -Concluding sentence: Body-Second Paragraph -Connecting sentence: -Background information: -Direct proof and parenthetical documentation: -Discussion of direct proof: -Concluding sentence: Body-Third Paragraph -Connecting sentence: -Background information: -Direct proof and parenthetical documentation: -Discussion of direct proof: -Concluding sentence: Concluding Paragraph -Summarize key points made in the body of the essay: -Reflect on thesis statement: Rubric for Essay Writing Categories Below Level 1 Knowledge/ Understanding The student: -knowledge of the elements of expository writing Level 2 (60-69%) Level 3 (70-79%) Level 4 (80 100%) The student: The student: The student: The student: -shows every limited knowledge of the elements of expository writing -shows limited knowledge of the elements of expository writing -shows some knowledge of the elements of expository writing -shows considerable knowledge of the elements of expository writing -shows thorough knowledge of the elements of expository writing -understanding of information and ideas -shows very limited understanding of information and ideas -shows limited understanding of information and ideas -shows some understanding of information and ideas -shows considerable understanding of information and ideas -shows thorough understanding of information and ideas Thinking The student: The student: The student: The student: The student: -critical thinking skills -uses critical thinking skills in producing expository writing with very limited effectiveness -uses critical thinking skills in producing expository writing with limited effectiveness -uses critical thinking skills in producing expository writing with some effectiveness -uses critical thinking skills in producing expository writing with considerable effectiveness -uses critical thinking skills in producing expository writing with a high degree of effectiveness -inquiry skills -uses inquiry skills to gather information with very limited effectiveness -uses inquiry skills to gather information with limited effectiveness -uses inquiry skills to gather information with some effectiveness -uses inquiry skills to gather information with considerable effectiveness -uses inquiry skills to gather information with high degree of effectiveness Communication The student: The student: The student: The student: The student: -communication of information and ideas -communicates information and ideas with very limited clarity and organization -communicates information and ideas with limited clarity and organization -communicates information and ideas with some clarity and organization -communicates information and ideas with considerable clarity and organization -communicates information and ideas with a high degree of clarity and organization -use of elements of expository writing -shows very limited command of elements of expository writing -shows limited command of elements of expository writing -shows some command of elements of expository writing -shows considerable command of elements of expository writing -shows extensive command of elements of expository writing Application The student: The student: The student: The student: The student: -application of language conventions -uses language conventions with very limited accuracy and effectiveness -uses language conventions with limited accuracy and effectiveness -uses language conventions with some accuracy and effectiveness -uses language conventions with considerable effectiveness -uses language conventions with a high degree of accuracy and effectiveness -application of the writing process -uses the writing process with very limited effectiveness -uses the writing process with limited effectiveness -uses the writing process with some effectiveness -uses the writing process with considerable effectiveness -uses the writing process with a high degree of effectiveness Comments/next steps: Level 1 (50-59%) Persuasive Essay Writing Rubric Criteria Level R Level 1 Level 2 Level 3 Level 4 Knowledge/ Understanding -shows an insufficient degree of knowledge of elements of the essay form -shows a passable degree of knowledge of elements of the essay form -shows a moderate degree of knowledge of elements of the essay form -shows a considerable degree of knowledge of elements of the essay from -shows a high degree of knowledge of elements of the essay form Thinking -interprets/ analyses ideas and information with insufficient effectiveness -interprets/ analyses ideas and information with passable effectiveness -interprets/ analyses ideas and information with moderate effectiveness -interprets/ analyses ideas and information with considerable effectiveness -interprets/ analyses ideas and information with a high degree of effectiveness -provides evidence that supports thesis with insufficient effectiveness -provides evidence that supports the thesis with passable effectiveness -provides evidence that supports the thesis with moderate effectiveness -provides evidence that supports the thesis with considerable effectiveness -provides evidence that supports the thesis with a high degree of effectiveness -communicates persuasively to a specific audience with insufficient effectiveness -communicates persuasively to a specific audience with passable effectiveness -communicates persuasively to a specific audience with moderate effectiveness -communicates persuasively to a specific audience with considerable effectiveness -communicates persuasively to a specific audience with high degree of effectiveness -shows an insufficient degree of command of the essay form -shows a passable degree of command of the essay form -shows a moderate degree of command of the essay form -shows a considerable degree of command of the essay form -shows high degree of command of the essay form -uses language conventions with insufficient accuracy and effectiveness -uses language conventions with passable accuracy and effectiveness -uses language conventions with moderate accuracy and effectiveness -uses language conventions with considerable accuracy and effectiveness -uses language conventions with high degree of accuracy and effectiveness -uses the writing process with moderate effectiveness -uses the writing process with considerable effectiveness -uses the writing process with high degree of effectiveness Communication Application -uses the writing process with insufficient effectiveness -uses the writing process with passable effectiveness Comments and or next steps:
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