This is a good sample for goal statement, and an average sample of AOI justification sample document Sample Document Very good and personal Goal Statement, and very nicely done AOI justification. Very good ideas. Just one little missmatch between her chosen AOI and her goal. In the beginning, she says her goal is to produce 3 story books, that would have been HI. In order to link it better to H&SE, she should have started her Goal Statement with her 2nd sentence: "I hope to set an example for book companies…", and then continue with the first, something like: that is why I will "produce 3 story books which have the same…". Sample Document Good and personal Goal Statement, although the student does not write the actual word "goal"… she should! Instead of "My idea is to…" it would have been better for the student to write "The goal of my project is to break…" AOI justification, OK … Although using the MYP AOI wording and even questions related to it, would have been better. Sample document Personal Project “Behind the Scenes: COLOMBIA” Product: My personal project is a Documentary about the myths currently attached to Colombia. The documentary is called ‘Behind the Scenes: COLOMBIA’ and I chose to make this documentary for a lot of reasons. The first reason is that I am from Colombia, and since I moved to Singapore, I have realised that a lot of my peers either do not know much about my country, or they have never even heard of it. The second reason is that the people who do know about Colombia, think of it as an extremely dangerous country where there is violence everywhere and drug dealers in every corner. Not only do my peers think this, but some teachers do as well. Recently, I have been getting a lot of questions from my peers and teachers about Colombia, if it is too dangerous to visit, if it is dangerous to live there, etc. So by making this documentary, I would like to set the record straight. My idea is to break the myths and show that Colombia is a beautiful place to live in. AOI Justification: My chosen AOI is Health & Social Education. This is because I am showcasing this to teenagers in OFS, my audience, and teaching through the documentary so they can understand more about Colombia and its people, and clear up any untrue or misguided facts about Colombia. The product will prove that the AOI is Health and Social Education because viewers will be more knowledgeable about Colombia and will understand more about the country. The AOI will also be proven by a survey given to students asking them what they know about Colombia before the video, and another one for after the video is over. I think this video will help to clear up a lot of untrue facts that students might have heard through media about Colombia. I think this because the video begins by explaining the myths about Colombia and then explains what the problems in Colombia really are and also shows that a lot of things are being done to help reduce the number of problems. This will be supported by a interview with a foreign person in Colombia who talks about how her opinion has changed about Colombia since she has lived there. All these things will help my audience to understand more about Colombia and towards the end of the video, there is footage about some of the good things Colombia is known for. Good sample of personal engagement in the goal statement. The AOI justification is a bit ambiguous, as in the beginning she focuses more on the social repercussion of the guide, which would lead to think the AOI would be C&S or H&SE, but later on she explains it better, and why HI is her chosen AOI. Sample document In-text reference in both subheadings! Very good sample of Goal Statement and AOI justification. Sample Document