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Understanding and Producing Language with FG © 2008
by Soepriatmadji
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A SAMPLE TEXT ANALYSIS: DESCRIBING FIELD OF THE DISCOURSE
To help you understand the possible steps in construing the experiential
meaning of a text a step-by step analysis is provided for you to adopt.
1. Text: FILM REVIEW
Danger in the Desert
The new film at the Paramount Cinema this week is Sahara
Safari, produced and directed by Anthony Faith and starring Mark
Manly and Gloria Gosh.
The film tells the story of Professor Brain (Mark Manly) and
his assistant Diana Hope (Gloria Gosh) who set out from Cairo to
explore the interior of the Sahara Desert. Professor Brain, an
archeologist, is searching for the lost city of Tumtomcapal.
Everything goes wrong for the explorers. Their truck breaks down,
and they are attacked and captured by bandits. Professor Brain
breaks a leg while trying to escape.
Eventually he persuades the bandits to be of help to him in
finding the lost city. He gains their assistance by telling them there
is gold buried beneath the city. After many days of travelling, the
city is discovered. However, it is guarded by more bandits. During
the fierce battle between the two groups of bandits, Professor
Brain and his assistant steal two camels and escape.
Sahara Safari is nonsense from the start to the finish and
both Mark Manly and Gloria Gosh give hopeless performances.
The film is worth seeing, however, for the very fine technicolour
photography of the Sahara Desert.
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Minor Danger in the Desert
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Major The new film at the Paramount Cinema this week is Sahara
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Major [it is] produced [by Anthony Faith]
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Major and [it is] directed by Anthony Faith
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Major and [it is] starring Mark Manly and Gloria Gosh.
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Major The film tells the story of Professor Brain (Mark Manly) and his
assistant Diana Hope (Gloria Gosh)
Major who set out from Cairo to explore the interior of the Sahara
Desert.
Major Professor Brain, an archeologist, is searching for the lost city of
Tumtomcapal.
Major Everything goes wrong for the explorers.
Major Their truck breaks down,
Major and they are attacked [by bandits]
Major and [they] captured by bandits.
Major Professor Brain breaks a leg
Major while [he is] trying to escape.
Major Eventually he persuades the bandits to be of help to him in
finding the lost city.
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He gains their assistance by telling them
there is gold
[the gold is] buried beneath the city.
After many days of travelling, 9the city is discovered.
However, it is guarded by more bandits.
Major During the fierce battle between the two groups of bandits,
Professor Brain and his assistant steal two camels
Major and [they] escape.
Major Sahara Safari is nonsense from the start to the finish
Major and both Mark Manly and Gloria Gosh give hopeless
performances.
Major The film is worth seeing, however, for the very fine technicolour
photography of the Sahara Desert.
Putting the clauses into their transitivity patterns
Text: FILM REVIEW
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Minor Danger in the Desert
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The new film
is
Sahara Safari,
Par: Token
Pro: Rel Id
Part: Value
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[it]
[Par: Goal]
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and
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and
[by Anthony Faith]
[Actor]
[it]
[Par: Goal]
[is] directed
Pro: Mat
[is] staring
Pro: Rel Id
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The film
tells
Par: Sayer
Pro: Verbal
by Anthony Faith
Actor
Mark Manly and Gloria Gosh.
Value
the story of Professor Brain (Mark Manly) and his
assistant Diana Hope (Gloria Gosh)
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who [they]
Set out
From Cairo
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Everything
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At the Paramount Cinema; this
week
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[is] produced
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[it]
[Par: Token]
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Professor Brain, an
archeologist,
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to explore the interior of the Sahara
Desert.
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is searching for
the lost city of Tumtomcapal.
Pro: Mat
Par: Goal
goes wrong
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for the explorers.
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Their truck
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and
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Professor Brain
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while
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He
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there
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breaks down,
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and
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are attacked
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[by bandits]
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[they]
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[are] captured
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by bandits.
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breaks
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a leg
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[he]
[Par: Actor]
[is] trying
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he
persuades
the bandits
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Pro: Verb
Par:
Receiver
to escape.
Par: Goal
to be of help to him in
finding the lost city.
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gains
Pro: Mat
their assistance
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is
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gold
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by telling them
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[the gold]
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[is] buried
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After many days of travelling,
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However,
it
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During the fierce battle between
the two groups of bandits,
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and
[they]
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Sahara Safari
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and
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beneath the city.
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the city
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is discovered.
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is guarded
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by more bandits.
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Professor Brain and steal
his assistant
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two camels
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escape.
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is
nonsense
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both Mark Manly and Gloria Gosh
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from the start to the finish
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give
Pro:
Mat
hopeless performances.
Par: Goal
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The film
is
worth
seeing,
Par: Token
Pro: Rel Id
Par: Value
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for the very fine
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Contextual description of the experiential meaning of the text
The experiential domain of the FILM REVIEW text is two main
characters of a film experiencing some fierce and dangerous incidents on their
way from Cairo to Sahara Dessert in their effort to explore the interior of the
Desert. Their experience is elaborated in mostly material processes (16) such
as set out, search, attack, capture, break, escape etc. The immediate purpose
of the text production is to illustrate that the film is full of challenge and action
that may endanger the actors. This can be seen from the semantic property of
the material processes (such as: attack, capture, break, escape) being used in
the film review text. The long-term goal is to tell people that they must make
efforts to get something done for them. This is implicitly picturized in the film
review text. You can also say that the long-term goal is as in a proverb “Kill the
bear before you sell the skin”, that is you have to do something as your effort
before you really achieve it.
The experiential meaning of the FILM REVIEW text is developed
particularly by introducing Sahara Safari in a Relational Process is as in The new
film at the Paramount Cinema this week is Sahara Safari which provides
identification to the new film being reviewed. It then moves to Material
Processes (16), which dominate the whole text, to introduce the dangerous
activities, challenges and actions undergone by the actors (14). This means
that the text encodes events, goings on, or doings rather than expressing the
beings and in the internal world of cognition or perception. To end the film
review text the text writer again presents Sahara Safari in a Relational Process
is as in The film is worth seeing,… to construe the relationship of being
between the participants.